Read the Story, The Machine by Sione Fatai. It will take you to the secret world of the dreaded Alien Takeover.... But wait... Superman and his Trusty Team of Supers might be able to save us all!
Kia Ora Sione! Wow the story you have written is awesome! Jam packed with lots of adjectives! Also I think you have done a great job with the length of your story. Do you think you will continue the story on? Or will the Supers have another adventure? Sarah
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Kia Ora Sione!
ReplyDeleteWow the story you have written is awesome! Jam packed with lots of adjectives! Also I think you have done a great job with the length of your story. Do you think you will continue the story on? Or will the Supers have another adventure?
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